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The grey cotton candy,
spun around the turning wind,
tastes a bitter sweetness,
kisses thy strength and weakness.

Tumbling roars so delicate,
strike into parallel thoughts.
Behind closed eyes, won't leave,
through the stubborn mind will weave.

A fatal beuty, the window spies,
the fury, such a delicacy.
Unlike the crimson colours we release,
a vivid expression of earth.
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~Shopjob Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi, I used this magnificent poetry in [link] and ofcourse gave you full credit :)
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*kiwi-damnation Nov 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely beautiful.
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lol. THat was supposed to be very nice. hehe :dance:
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:iconeatingmyownfears:
very night!

One suggestion - should it be "fatal beauty?"
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=DragonsChest Oct 29, 2008  Professional Writer
Very short, but ultra sweet... :clap:
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