literature

A death Wish

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Literature Text

A note in a bottle,
a glass bottle,
like a kiss of death,
a death wish.

The dust spins,
around the note,
the note in the bottle,
the glass bottle.

Never to be opened,
sealed with a kiss,
she was kissed by death,
a death wish.

Notes are added,
to the bottle,
the hidden truth,
behind her smile.

She owns the notes,
notes in the bottle,
the glass bottle,
behind her smile.

A note in a bottle,
a glass bottle,
like a kiss of death,
a death wish.

Never to be opened,
sealed with a kiss,
she was kissed by death,
a death wish.

She hides her bottle
away from the world,
never to be opened,
sealed with a kiss.

She takes her bottle,
smashes it down,
the poisen escapes,
escapes her lips.

No more bottle,
no more wish.
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invinsibleberryyy's avatar
I love the repetition in the poem, and how everything flows smoothly. You're awesome. ;D

No offence, but I think you spelt ';poison' wrongly? Or is it meant to be that way?